Aging

The falling leaves of autumn bring sadness as age creeps in and time slips away.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/5/2021 8:46:00 AM

Yes indeed, autumn is a time for reflection. Lovely, Phyllis ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2021 2:42:00 PM

But we also can rejoice that we are one day closer to heaven than we have ever been before. It can be scary, nerve racking, and filled with uncertainty. It definitely is not for sissies. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/12/2020 12:48:00 PM

They at least bring perspective, a hint of wisdom, no need to coverup, only slowly fall... Nice monoku, Phyllis!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/16/2020 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my haiku. love phyl

Constance La France

Date: 11/11/2020 10:12:00 AM

Phyllis, excellent writing, time is cruel _Constance

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/12/2020 11:12:00 AM

Thanks Constance and yes time indeed does fly by as we age.

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2020 6:44:00 AM

Indeed, I feel it too.. Great one liner..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2020 9:27:00 AM

Thanks S1 and yes we are feeling the aches and pains that come with age. Still smiling even with the thought of winter around the corner. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2020 7:13:00 PM

The Autumn of life both beautiful and sad.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/22/2020 9:26:00 AM

Thanks Kim. Age does creep up on us and hubby retired this week so kinda hits us that we are getting old. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2020 10:18:00 AM

- When autumn approaches winter ... it's a sad time regardless of age, dear Phyllis - Hope all is well with you and Albert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/19/2020 10:39:00 AM

Thanks we are all well. Al retired two days ago and today is his 70th birthday. Now comes the joys of having and getting used to him being around the house. Hope all is well with you too. love phyl