Connie Gildersleeve Poet Grook

Aggravated By Squeaks

My comfortable shoes are full of squeaks.
An unrelenting sound I can't possibly ignore,
Like an old wooden rocking chair that creaks
Or noisy wet sneakers on a tile floor.
It's quite loud and not only noticed by me, eek!
I've tried tip-toeing but it's causing footsore.
I'm aggravated beyond belief with these squeaks.

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Donna Jones April 13, 2013 at 6:37 AM Congratulations Connie :-) ...Donna

Tim Ryerson April 11, 2013 at 9:31 PM I squeaked with laughter the first time I read this and I'm still squeaking... You're really squeaking me out here, Connie...Stop it now wouldja? My tummy hurts...

Poet Destroyer A April 11, 2013 at 10:44 AM Hi Connie, this is a wonderful grook, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

David Fisher April 9, 2013 at 1:44 PM Nicely done in the contest!

Sara Kendrick April 8, 2013 at 1:55 PM Cute one..Those shoes that squeak are annoying for sure..Congrats on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson April 8, 2013 at 12:44 PM Great grook Connie and a great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 8, 2013 at 8:03 AM more squeaky shoes , well done Connie I must listen out for some lol xx

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2013 at 9:25 PM Oh, I really like this grook. I see many people are choosing the old squeaky shoe one. haha Connie Gildersleeve March 6, 2013 at 2:44 PM Thanks Andrea. I enjoyed writing it. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman March 4, 2013 at 9:04 AM just love this Connie, anything especially in poetry, that is different, i'm a fool for.. and so i love this.... Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 1:23 PM Thanks Harry for your kind comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Tim Ryerson March 3, 2013 at 6:04 PM So what?...Let um squeak!...I'm squeaking with laughter...good one Connie! - Tim Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 5:15 AM I'm happy I put laughter in your breath with this little squeaky Grook. Thank you for your delightful comment Tim. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones March 3, 2013 at 5:55 PM Squeaky cute.....:-) :-) :-) :-) Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 5:16 AM Thank you Donna for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Williams March 3, 2013 at 1:31 PM Connie try slippers...wonderful write...David Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 6:11 AM Sometime we have to grow a tough skiing for those who do not try to understand. I'm happy I put a tickle in your breath with this poem. Thank you Mandy for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 5:17 AM Thank you David for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 3, 2013 at 12:47 PM Oh Connie i love this, I do not possess a pair of shoes i only have trainers, the last pair fo shoes I had which had to have iron bars put through, they clicked and squeaked you could here me coming from miles away i had to grow a tough skin then but this so tickled me xx Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 6:37 AM Mandy sometimes we must grow a thick skin for those that does not care to understand. I'm happy I could put a tickle in your breath. Thank you for stopping by and for your comment. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2013 at 12:39 PM Cute one..Enjoyed reading it..Yes, comfortable shoes are hard to find..Sad when one finds a comfortable pair and they squeak..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 6:13 AM Sara thank you for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey March 3, 2013 at 10:32 AM Ha Ha, this is a cleverly written write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a tremendously squeaky piece, such a true poem(we all love our comfortable shoes!) Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 6:15 AM Russell I'm happy I could put a laugh in your breath with this poem. Thanks for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie