Agent Orange Eclipse

Agent Orange
Tinging lush, green foliage
Breath-taking shadow
Swallows mercurial moon
Invisible orb hovers



October 11, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Nicely done visual, stephen. Congrats on the winners list.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Stephen. Love, Carol
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October 24, 2012 at 4:13 AM
CONGRATS STEPHEN FOR AN INTENSE WRITE AND EXCITING WIN ON THIS VIVID VIEW LUV ..
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October 23, 2012 at 7:13 PM
STEPHEN, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
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October 23, 2012 at 2:16 PM
S, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
Sullivan Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poem, A Many Splendored Thing. Your title says it all, as do the words breath-taking shadow. My brother,retired Vietnam vet, still suffers from AO. You said a lot in few words. I've not been on Soup in several years. It got to be quite a challenge to keep up with all the comments. All best, Orma Sullivan
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