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Agendaless Exuberance

Let's jump for joy, the weekend's here at last,
I must forget my work worries and strife.
We'll head to the beach, I've checked the forecast. -
I can just unwind and enjoy my life,
being with our kids and my lovely wife.
The pressures of work sure can take their toll,
family time truly uplifts my soul.
Building sandcastles, paddling in the sea,
taking time out, an achievable goal.
Precious moments with all the family!

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Agendaless Exuberance Poetry Contest

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11/26/21

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Caren Krutsinger December 2, 2021 at 8:39 PM Enjoy it while you have it "family time truly uplifts my soul." Someday there will only be family time for their family, and you will be sitting in front of a TV wishing they could invent some better TV shows.

Delice Arleen Skelly November 28, 2021 at 3:10 AM Very buoyant write, nice...Delice

Heidi Sands November 27, 2021 at 1:47 PM Sounds Ike a joyous time Jan. Great one :) Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:27 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham November 27, 2021 at 10:20 AM Nothing beats making happy memories with your family, we have to make sure work doesn't get in the way. Tom Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:26 PM Thanks Tom, I agree with you xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta November 27, 2021 at 9:47 AM Those were the days! Now families at the beach just bury their face in a cellphone, but enjoyed, Jan! Aloha! Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:26 PM sadly that may be true Rico:-( hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile November 27, 2021 at 5:15 AM Lovely thoughts and images tickle my face as I read Jan, nice one! Happy Saturday xxoo Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:25 PM Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar November 27, 2021 at 1:18 AM A family picnic will always be appreciated. Hugs. Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:25 PM Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 26, 2021 at 6:48 PM Very nicely done, Jan. I will be heading home tomorrow. It was a good week except for bad news about our dog Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:22 PM Thanks Andrea keep me posted about Snickers:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra L Brown November 26, 2021 at 5:31 PM Beautiful written, Good Luck in the Contest Jan. Blessings ~ Debra Jan Allison November 27, 2021 at 2:21 PM Thanks Debra:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin November 26, 2021 at 4:45 PM what a beautiful image, great job Jan! Jan Allison November 26, 2021 at 4:50 PM Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins November 26, 2021 at 3:26 PM Nice one, Jan. Best wishes in Unseeking Seeker's contest. Hope you are getting out a little more now. Thinking of you. Jan Allison November 26, 2021 at 3:34 PM Thanks Milton, I wrote this in my break time in between supervising exams today. I am still tired but I think its easing a little. Hope all is good with you:-) hugs Jan xx