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Agendaless Exuberance

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Let's jump for joy, the weekend's here at last, I must forget my work worries and strife. We'll head to the beach, I've checked the forecast. - I can just unwind and enjoy my life, being with our kids and my lovely wife. The pressures of work sure can take their toll, family time truly uplifts my soul. Building sandcastles, paddling in the sea, taking time out, an achievable goal. Precious moments with all the family! 10 syllables per line checked with HMS rhyme checked with rhyme zone Agendaless Exuberance Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker 11/26/21

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/2/2021 8:39:00 PM

Enjoy it while you have it "family time truly uplifts my soul." Someday there will only be family time for their family, and you will be sitting in front of a TV wishing they could invent some better TV shows.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/28/2021 3:10:00 AM

Very buoyant write, nice...Delice

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/27/2021 1:47:00 PM

Sounds Ike a joyous time Jan. Great one :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/27/2021 10:20:00 AM

Nothing beats making happy memories with your family, we have to make sure work doesn't get in the way. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I agree with you xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/27/2021 9:47:00 AM

Those were the days! Now families at the beach just bury their face in a cellphone, but enjoyed, Jan! Aloha!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:26:00 PM

sadly that may be true Rico:-( hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/27/2021 5:15:00 AM

Lovely thoughts and images tickle my face as I read Jan, nice one! Happy Saturday xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/27/2021 1:18:00 AM

A family picnic will always be appreciated. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2021 6:48:00 PM

Very nicely done, Jan. I will be heading home tomorrow. It was a good week except for bad news about our dog

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Andrea keep me posted about Snickers:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/26/2021 5:31:00 PM

Beautiful written, Good Luck in the Contest Jan. Blessings ~ Debra

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2021 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Debra:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 11/26/2021 4:45:00 PM

what a beautiful image, great job Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/26/2021 3:26:00 PM

Nice one, Jan. Best wishes in Unseeking Seeker's contest. Hope you are getting out a little more now. Thinking of you.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Milton, I wrote this in my break time in between supervising exams today. I am still tired but I think its easing a little. Hope all is good with you:-) hugs Jan xx