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Agendaless Exuberance

Let's jump for joy, the weekend's here at last,
I must forget my work worries and strife.
We'll head to the beach, I've checked the forecast. -
I can just unwind and enjoy my life,
being with our kids and my lovely wife.
The pressures of work sure can take their toll,
family time truly uplifts my soul.
Building sandcastles, paddling in the sea,
taking time out, an achievable goal.
Precious moments with all the family!

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Agendaless Exuberance Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

11/26/21

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/2/2021 8:39:00 PM Enjoy it while you have it "family time truly uplifts my soul." Someday there will only be family time for their family, and you will be sitting in front of a TV wishing they could invent some better TV shows. Login to Reply

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 11/28/2021 3:10:00 AM Very buoyant write, nice...Delice Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2021 1:47:00 PM Sounds Ike a joyous time Jan. Great one :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:27:00 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/27/2021 10:20:00 AM Nothing beats making happy memories with your family, we have to make sure work doesn't get in the way. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:26:00 PM Thanks Tom, I agree with you xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 11/27/2021 9:47:00 AM Those were the days! Now families at the beach just bury their face in a cellphone, but enjoyed, Jan! Aloha! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:26:00 PM sadly that may be true Rico:-( hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile Date: 11/27/2021 5:15:00 AM Lovely thoughts and images tickle my face as I read Jan, nice one! Happy Saturday xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:25:00 PM Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/27/2021 1:18:00 AM A family picnic will always be appreciated. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:25:00 PM Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/26/2021 6:48:00 PM Very nicely done, Jan. I will be heading home tomorrow. It was a good week except for bad news about our dog Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:22:00 PM Thanks Andrea keep me posted about Snickers:-) hugs Jan xx

Debra L Brown Date: 11/26/2021 5:31:00 PM Beautiful written, Good Luck in the Contest Jan. Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/27/2021 2:21:00 PM Thanks Debra:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin Date: 11/26/2021 4:45:00 PM what a beautiful image, great job Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2021 4:50:00 PM Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins Date: 11/26/2021 3:26:00 PM Nice one, Jan. Best wishes in Unseeking Seeker's contest. Hope you are getting out a little more now. Thinking of you. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2021 3:34:00 PM Thanks Milton, I wrote this in my break time in between supervising exams today. I am still tired but I think its easing a little. Hope all is good with you:-) hugs Jan xx