Get Your Premium Membership

Ageless Laughing

Wheeled in from the cold, wearing layers of winter clothes, her aging daughter brings her to a table close to the door. The years on her face are apparent by the loose skin drooping from her cheekbones, eyes sinking into her face as her eyelids spill over into her line of sight. The sparce wisps of white hair on the sides of her head stick out a little like that of a clown, the top of her head more or less bald. She reaches for the coffee her daughter brought to the table, and holds the mug with both hands, bringing it slowly to her lips. At first glance, her obvious vulnerability brought tears to my eyes.... But then something made her laugh, and the smile on her face was all I could see now. I didn't see old age anymore, I didn't see vulnerability, I only saw a mom and her daughter drinking coffee and laughing about something I would never know. I turned back to my own coffee and smiled as I raised the cup to my lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/8/2010 5:10:00 AM
Wonderful expressions of emotion in this piece Katie .. excellent descriptive lines... I read my poetry twice a week at many senior citizen facilities and children's hospitals and seeing the smiles on their faces is the reason for writing ... sharing a gift that brings joy to others.. enjoyed your wonderful poetry today and thankxxx for your sweet and special comments on my reads with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2010 5:00:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Katie. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2010 3:38:00 AM
Wow Katie, you painted a vivid picture with your words and you so aptly titled as well. Thanks for the smiles with this write..In the end the laughing made a big difference. Thank you for your comment and I am sorry for what you had to go through as well.. Wilma
Login to Reply
Date: 12/7/2010 5:19:00 PM
Things are only how we see them sometimes..Very expressive work..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs