Ageing

I bid farewell to
the brash carnival of youth
and await the peace                     
that follows on from mellow 
age for all who earn that gift.




Jenish Somadas - sponsor
Let the pens flow... Tanka competition
02/22/20

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Beata Agustin

July 7, 2025 at 12:55 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.