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Mt. Eden Normal Primary School, Auckland NZ. The year was 1971. We were just 10 years old.

For Beverly.

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Age of Aquarius

Time was when in a golden age begun
                        I gazed upon an infinite beauty,
and at the heart of her constellation 
         in a silk cotton dress a vision was she.

I vowed the ends of the earth to follow
                  your heavenly star wherever it led,
and to sit beside your desk in your glow
         but sat my old nemesis in my stead.

Bows in your hair and stardust in your eyes
              rushed my pulse to farthest extremity,
but when the Age of Innocence dies
         lost is the life and joy you gave to me.

You were my universe my celestial lass
           with flowing waves of hair a free spirit -
into its magnetic pull in our earthly pass
           I was a flashing comet in your orbit.

Now I feel my pulse and racing heart slowed
  since I followed you home down Valley Road.
But I was just a boy and smitten you see
           and you were my girl, sweet Beverly.
                                                                       
Bows in your hair and stardust in your eyes
              rushed my pulse to farthest extremity,
but when the Age of Innocence dies
         lost is the life and joy you gave to me.



            Written: November 1992
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Keith, pretty astounding for a young poet. Talent you do have. Smiles!
Trestrail Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Cheers Duke.
Greenhough Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:58 AM
I feel the depth of this poem. How our passions change through the years. It sounds Ike a good bye to puppy love.
Trestrail Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:51 PM
Yep, to me she was an angel. Cheers Hilda.
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