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Age Appropriate

Whining, is age appropriate, With wrinkles - both newborns and aged. Boo-hoos - in cradle; before grave. The old straitened; babes’ swaddled. With wrinkles, both newborns and aged, They are bathed, despoiled, and diapered. The old straitened; babes’ swaddled. Rock and roll lullabies, falling. They are bathed, despoiled, and diapered. Boo-hoos - in cradle, before grave. Rock and roll lullabies, falling. Whining is age-appropriate.

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Date: 5/2/2025 2:28:00 PM
I try not to do too much of it, but, once you reach a certain age, a little "whining" is understandable.
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Date: 4/23/2025 5:44:00 AM
- You're so right "Whining is age-appropriate", Kim :) - Love this :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2025 11:35:00 AM
Good one Kim. So true.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2025 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Date: 4/22/2025 9:48:00 AM
What a powerful write you have here. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful spring day writing away........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2025 1:44:00 PM
Happy Day! Thank you, Paula!
Date: 4/21/2025 9:25:00 PM
This is almost painfully true- your mind takes us all to the common meaning of things, it's always a pleasure to read
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2025 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! hugs

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