David Crandall Poet Footle

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10/7/2026 for 1503 October Part 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Agatha Christie Meets the Footles

The Butler
perfect
suspect

The Maid
she cleans
crime scenes

The Chauffeur
he drives,
connives

The Cook
strange stew - 
who knew?

The Gardener
must dig
hole big

The Heir
can't wait -
estate

The Rival 
through sin,
I win

The Blackmail Victim
my fear
dies here

The Wife
affair?
so there!

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Alison A Smith October 7, 2026 at 8:47 PM The footle form is a perfect fit for this miniature murder mystery. Each tiny rhyme sketches a character with a motive or a hint of guilt, while the wit keeps the whole cast delightfully suspicious. David Crandall October 7, 2026 at 8:49 PM Thanks, Alison!

I Am Anaya October 7, 2026 at 11:42 AM Hello! My favorite footle "The Heir can't wait - estate" made me laugh! Wished I'd thought of this....Liked & Inspired David Crandall October 7, 2026 at 8:48 PM Haha, glad you liked it Ananya!