Against the Waves

~Very cold waters, i had jumped right into them, stole my breath away.

~I can be frail, my will keeps me standing up, i will not give in.

~Out of the waters, the warm breeze takes hold of me, drives the chill away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 17, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. The title is fitting. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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March 17, 2010 at 9:48 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jordyn. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 17, 2010 at 2:07 AM
Like this Jordyn - Thanks for the share -:)
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March 16, 2010 at 11:42 PM
It took me awhile to figure this out but it is terrific. Im impressed! BG
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March 16, 2010 at 8:31 PM
perfect reflection of your title! Jordyn! BRAVO! jimbo
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