Against Peace

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i wrote this in quatrains filled with hard hitting soulful facts we all know where treason lies under oath 

This world has fallen into chaos 
Let's awake the sleeping demon
when a certain world leader 
has used from the forbidden book 

Totalitarian dictatorship under lies 
we need to pray to defeat these evil corrupt powers 
do you not think an angel rides in the whirlwind 
and directs this storm a new world order surfaces
 
An ingrowing disease spreads rapidly forcing 
destroying public opinion on moral choice 
for me it is easy knowing who controls deceit then 
secret handshakes with hidden meanings 
 
Signs away our rights at every turn becomes an obstacle 
human values are overturned in favour of the sinner 
the moral fabric of society has become twisted against truth
in views within murder humanity has completely gone insane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/17/2017 10:14:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! I certainly concur with all that you've pronounced here my very good friend!! And, unfortunately, there will be more to come of all of this. Especially with Trump, and the unwise departure from the USA from the world stage as it turns more and more inward, the quest for truth, justice, morality, and standing up for humanity at large, will be more threatened by the old historical ghosts of ignorance, stupidity, and totalitarianism!! This must be resisted!! A FAVE!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 12/14/2017 9:04:00 PM
You hit the nail right on the head about the new world order emerging Liam; aka order out of chaos! Well done!~Che :)
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Date: 12/14/2017 8:09:00 PM
Liam, your pen rings veracity boldly! Thank you for posting-:)
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Date: 12/14/2017 7:15:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all.This is the end of days, all signs are there according to the Bible, Liam.It makes me very sad for all the bad going on in the world .Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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