Against All Odds

At first they doubted she would even live, Then stated calmly that she would not walk. This child for whom my life I'd gladly give, Denounced as one of those who'd never talk. I covered outraged ears, their words to block. For those long months she danced beneath my heart. I had played music for her from the start, My own keen sense of rhythm to advance. She listened to my cues and knew her part. Despite their gloom, this child of mine will dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 6:14 PM
OK I dub the my #1 just perfection! Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:48 AM
So touching and beautiful. Loved it. Many congrats for this win.
M V Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Congratulations on your great win,Joyce!
Arowolo Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Fine write,Full of passion,Congratulations ,Joyce for this masterpiece.Kudos to you...Correct the typo on rhythm....Love O.A
Puddifoot Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 3:46 PM
oh joyce, this is wonderful! I loved the personal approach and emotion (it was just squeezed out of 1st place, could've easily been a 1st) a big congrats to you :-)
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 2:26 PM
mesmerized by your original take on dance, joyce.. congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 12:14 PM
congrats Joyce on a lovely win for this amazing write on a special child who touched u so deeply.. a great well deserved win for sensitive write luv..
Phookan Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:18 AM
So poignant, Joyce this has moved me so.. It's a beautiful one for nette's contest. Best wishes and love...
Horsman Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:17 AM
brilliant tribute to your child Joyce, this is a wonderful soul searching poem, a winner is this. harry
Merryman Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 3:40 PM
I really like this, Joyce. It's fantastic! Best wishes in the contest. I'm sure this will be a winner. Love, Kim
Bauer Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 2:36 PM
very powerful and beautiful! good luck in the contest.
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