Kash Poet Poet Verse

Again You Are Smiling

Again you are smiling at me,
again the call of lush green tree
turning me a bird flying free,
let me fly in your mind
and look for a nest with much glee,
your love-nest I must find.




© kashinath karmakar (3rd July 2011)
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Placement: 4th;(July 2011)

Contest:Rime Couee

Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Jack Ross Jr. August 2, 2011 at 3:11 PM Excellent write and metaphors, God bless....old Jack

Tahera Mannan July 13, 2011 at 8:31 AM Beautiful Kashi. Many congrats for this win.

Carolyn Devonshire July 12, 2011 at 12:05 PM Dear Kash, please lead me to this love nest when you find it. I love your poem. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman July 12, 2011 at 7:00 AM Kashinath, Love your neart the top winner. "Congratulations" on a lovely piece. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 5:22 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson July 11, 2011 at 2:40 PM Very nice Kashinath. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 2:14 PM Congrats Kash on your super duper win with this new form and excellent expressive write luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 11, 2011 at 1:59 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2011 at 12:21 PM Hi and goodbye. I think I will not come back here until tomorrow! I will rest in bed now and just write or something. thanks for your comments today, Kash.Have a great day!

Elizabeth Wesley July 4, 2011 at 12:00 PM A winner for me Kash, I wish you the best in the contest.

Nette Onclaud July 4, 2011 at 6:10 AM excited to see your next gem, kashi... soon?? :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2011 at 11:16 PM This is sweet as can be, Kash! Looking for that little love nest! A great personification poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 3, 2011 at 3:04 PM oh lovely emotion and touch of passion Kashinath.. u did fantastic with this new form ..good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram .. he has challenged us and we have met it with fire..luv..good luck..my friend..

Jack Horne July 3, 2011 at 1:52 PM Sweet and tender write, Kash : )

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2011 at 9:23 AM whooa, this was fast, kashi... a flowing, dazzling write! haven;t looked at the contest proper... slept the whole day, lol!! winning's best.. come visit, okay? :) huggs, nete

Johnny Sumler July 3, 2011 at 8:46 AM Can't wait to see this in the winners circle! This is a beautiful write Kash! Nice natural mystic tune here.