Again and Again

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mother, again and again I come to visit you and each time I bring a fresh picked red rose with dew the bus ride to the cemetery is hours long and I have miles to go, so I hum your song I will never forget "I'll be seeing you" was playing on that horrible day that I ended your suffering since then, I have been on a very long road best to unplug said the doctors and how my tears flowed now forlorn at your tomb I fall to my knees, mother, how I miss you everyday, forgive me please there is not a single day, a singe day mother at least I have comfort that you are with father you are at peace I hope with trees filigree oh, my tears could fill the deep blue sea ___________________________ February 16, 2022 Poetry/Couplet/again and again Copyright Protected, ID 01-1430-667-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1075) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/17/2022 First Place

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/19/2022 6:33:00 AM

She will know..' It is but a short time we are on Earth, your reunion will come Constance, as We know having conversed before on our Experiences of beyond co-incidence in this.' God be with you.)

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:50:00 AM

Joe, thank you so much for the comment and yes, mother is waiting for me to come one day ~Constance

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/17/2022 2:46:00 PM

Hello Constance ... a beautiful tribute you have written, and even though you are apart, you still show how much you loved your Mum - thank you Constance - Lindsay

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:52:00 AM

Lindsay, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, I love/loved my mother deeply, she was not just a mother but my best friend and a good listener, we went all over the place together, her death left a huge hole in my heart ~Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/17/2022 6:16:00 AM

Think of the happy moments of tenderness and joy together, Constance. Your loved ones are always with you vibrationally, for soul is eternal. Congrats on winning Brian’s contest!

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:53:00 AM

Seeker, oh yes there were many happy moments and joy for us but the sadness of her passing is a forever dagger, thanks for the congrats ~ Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/17/2022 5:16:00 AM

Great poem and a loving tribute to mother. Beautifully written as usual. Congratulations! Thank you also for the opportunities given to me to take part in your contests. Thank you very much.

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:54:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations and you are welcome, I really like doing contests, and I learn a lot too ~Constance

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/16/2022 11:06:00 PM

Constance, I love this poem dearly. I lost my mom in 1988 and I miss very much every day. Thank you.

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2022 8:56:00 AM

Timothy, thank you for the compliment, so sorry for your loss, I know oh to well the pain, yes not a day goes by, right that we do not think of our moms ~Constance