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mother, again and again I come to visit you and each time I bring a fresh picked red rose with dew the bus ride to the cemetery is hours long and I have miles to go, so I hum your song I will never forget "I'll be seeing you" was playing on that horrible day that I ended your suffering since then, I have been on a very long road best to unplug said the doctors and how my tears flowed now forlorn at your tomb I fall to my knees, mother, how I miss you everyday, forgive me please there is not a single day, a singe day mother at least I have comfort that you are with father you are at peace I hope with trees filigree oh, my tears could fill the deep blue sea ___________________________ February 16, 2022 Poetry/Couplet/again and again Copyright Protected, ID 01-1430-667-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1075) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/17/2022 First Place

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Date: 2/19/2022 6:33:00 AM
She will know..' It is but a short time we are on Earth, your reunion will come Constance, as We know having conversed before on our Experiences of beyond co-incidence in this.' God be with you.)
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:50:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the comment and yes, mother is waiting for me to come one day ~Constance
Date: 2/17/2022 2:46:00 PM
Hello Constance ... a beautiful tribute you have written, and even though you are apart, you still show how much you loved your Mum - thank you Constance - Lindsay
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:52:00 AM
Lindsay, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, I love/loved my mother deeply, she was not just a mother but my best friend and a good listener, we went all over the place together, her death left a huge hole in my heart ~Constance
Date: 2/17/2022 6:16:00 AM
Think of the happy moments of tenderness and joy together, Constance. Your loved ones are always with you vibrationally, for soul is eternal. Congrats on winning Brian’s contest!
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:53:00 AM
Seeker, oh yes there were many happy moments and joy for us but the sadness of her passing is a forever dagger, thanks for the congrats ~ Constance
Date: 2/17/2022 5:16:00 AM
Great poem and a loving tribute to mother. Beautifully written as usual. Congratulations! Thank you also for the opportunities given to me to take part in your contests. Thank you very much.
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:54:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations and you are welcome, I really like doing contests, and I learn a lot too ~Constance
Date: 2/16/2022 11:06:00 PM
Constance, I love this poem dearly. I lost my mom in 1988 and I miss very much every day. Thank you.
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:56:00 AM
Timothy, thank you for the compliment, so sorry for your loss, I know oh to well the pain, yes not a day goes by, right that we do not think of our moms ~Constance
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