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Again a Big Mistake

Trapped in the midst of a murky forest traipsed across the length and breadth of jungle None to speak of, heart turned sick and sorest I was alone in the dark, I stumbled Amidst the shrubs, numerous eyes glittered they chorused"Welcome to the land of bliss" Cute Bunnies held my hands, not embittered They took me into the dark vast abyss Umpteen friends joined us in the welcome pomp Starting from tireless ants to giant rats All mingled,played and dived into the swamp Glad I could hear voices of birds and chats Days went off;One day I saw an apple I ate it, ignoring instinct appeal August-25-2018

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Date: 8/30/2018 2:24:00 PM
Your creative metaphorical poem has been a delight to read, Supraja! I wonder if you came face to face with a snake! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/26/2018 3:49:00 PM
oh wow, what a metaphor!! great read!!
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Date: 8/25/2018 11:19:00 AM
A dark poem written by the bright pen of your Muse dear, Supraja! Impressive!
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Date: 8/25/2018 8:55:00 AM
Imagery intertwined with nature..this poem is so well written, Supraja. You are in your favorite environment...the ending is mysterious.
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