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in the winter twilight the sky has fallen to a shadow as trees and ground blend ebbing into vagueness and beneath my feet the way is wet and little frills of ice adorn all in crystalline, frosty and filigree and the air is full of snowflakes falling oh, my beloved snow has found me and I am breathless as he floats among hanging tree branches and I feel his sweet silent kisses upon my hair, my cheek and my ruby lips and I swirl as my beloved is whispering drifting and floating and I am wrapped within his arms knowing sadly he will leave me again ... ___________________ June 21, 2021 Poetry/Verse/again Copyright Protected, ID 06-1365-852-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (June 22) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/22/2021 First Place
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Holmes Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Constance - congratulations on your win. - the word pictures you paint of the snowflakes, falling, floating, such beautiful imagery - really enjoyed your poem. David
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June 23, 2021 at 4:31 PM
David, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment on my writing, appreciate, peace and tranquility _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Beautiful imagery Constance. Love the metaphor and personification of snow as a lover with a tinge of pensive melancholy. Congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the lovely comment and congratulations, love and serenity _Constance
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:58 AM
A beautiful poem on winter. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, tranquility is my wish for you, peace _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Hello Constance, a beautiful poem of winter. Love & Friendship.Darlene
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June 22, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Hello Constance, Your welcome my friend. Love, Darlene.
La France Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance
Hankins Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Incredibly lovely personification, Constance. A FAV for me!
La France Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and for the FAV, appreciate a lot, peace _Constance
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Superb. Best description of snow fall I have ever read. You are a great poet
La France Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Rama, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, peace _Constance
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