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in the winter twilight the sky has fallen to a shadow as trees and ground blend ebbing into vagueness and beneath my feet the way is wet and little frills of ice adorn all in crystalline, frosty and filigree and the air is full of snowflakes falling oh, my beloved snow has found me and I am breathless as he floats among hanging tree branches and I feel his sweet silent kisses upon my hair, my cheek and my ruby lips and I swirl as my beloved is whispering drifting and floating and I am wrapped within his arms knowing sadly he will leave me again ... ___________________ June 21, 2021 Poetry/Verse/again Copyright Protected, ID 06-1365-852-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (June 22) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/22/2021 First Place

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Date: 6/23/2021 12:34:00 PM
Constance - congratulations on your win. - the word pictures you paint of the snowflakes, falling, floating, such beautiful imagery - really enjoyed your poem. David
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2021 4:31:00 PM
David, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment on my writing, appreciate, peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 6/23/2021 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Constance. Love the metaphor and personification of snow as a lover with a tinge of pensive melancholy. Congratulations on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2021 4:32:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the lovely comment and congratulations, love and serenity _Constance
Date: 6/22/2021 9:58:00 AM
A beautiful poem on winter. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2021 6:53:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, tranquility is my wish for you, peace _Constance
Date: 6/21/2021 11:30:00 AM
Hello Constance, a beautiful poem of winter. Love & Friendship.Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/22/2021 10:52:00 AM
Hello Constance, Your welcome my friend. Love, Darlene.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2021 12:26:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/21/2021 8:29:00 AM
Incredibly lovely personification, Constance. A FAV for me!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2021 12:26:00 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and for the FAV, appreciate a lot, peace _Constance
Date: 6/21/2021 7:05:00 AM
Superb. Best description of snow fall I have ever read. You are a great poet
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2021 7:08:00 AM
Rama, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, peace _Constance

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