Aftertaste

the slick that sticks to the back of your tongue a little space time transporter you can hear the music smell the smoke

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Date: 12/30/2020 10:57:00 AM

A remembrance of Proust's "Remembrance of Things Past". It took him over 3,000 pages, but you simply summed it up Maureen. Kudos!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2020 8:27:00 AM

Oh my, thank you! ~x

Date: 12/26/2020 2:23:00 AM

Taste, smell and music are continuously probing in my chest of memories, Maureen! A delightful four liner! ~ Regards // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2020 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Paul! Warm hugs xomo

Date: 12/25/2020 12:45:00 PM

Smells and tastes take me traveling back in time now too

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2020 10:52:00 AM

I love it when it happens. xomo!

Date: 12/16/2020 5:15:00 AM

Great poetry!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/16/2020 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, xomo!

Date: 12/15/2020 11:45:00 AM

"What the mind can conceive and believe, the mind can achieve!"? Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/15/2020 3:18:00 PM

I certainly hope so! xomo

Date: 12/14/2020 8:06:00 PM

Funny how the taste of something can evoke a memory - for me it's peanut butter and maple syrup sandwiches (sounds weird but completely yummy!)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/15/2020 11:44:00 AM

Fernet-Branca will refresh! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2020 8:13:00 PM

Actually sounds amazing. Love the maple syrup, the darker the better.