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originally posted as a haiku

Afternoon Fun

late
afternoon~
reading
white
ink
blotches
in
the
sky



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE 10 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

natureskytimeupliftingfree verse

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Caren Krutsinger

December 19, 2019 at 1:54 AM

I am amazed at your imagination being set free Line!

December 19, 2019 at 8:42 AM

Coming from you, that is quite the compliment, Caren.

December 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM

Nice...though I like it better as a haiku and without any squiggles. More room for interpretation that way. ~ Wiggly Wolf

December 15, 2019 at 7:48 PM

Thanks for your feedback, Gershon. Good point.

December 13, 2019 at 5:09 PM

Another really good one :)

December 13, 2019 at 8:18 PM

Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

December 13, 2019 at 4:50 PM

Beautiful!

December 13, 2019 at 8:18 PM

Thank you, Kim.

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