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originally posted as a haiku

late afternoon~ reading white ink blotches in the sky AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE 10 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention Posted on December 13, 2019

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Date: 12/19/2019 1:54:00 AM
I am amazed at your imagination being set free Line!
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Date: 12/19/2019 8:42:00 AM
Coming from you, that is quite the compliment, Caren.
Date: 12/15/2019 5:56:00 PM
Nice...though I like it better as a haiku and without any squiggles. More room for interpretation that way. ~ Wiggly Wolf
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Date: 12/15/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thanks for your feedback, Gershon. Good point.
Date: 12/13/2019 5:09:00 PM
Another really good one :)
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Date: 12/13/2019 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/13/2019 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2019 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.

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