Afternoon Afterthoughts

Like a late afternoon afterthought,
a sudden, heavy downpour drenches
and floods the parched marshland.

Here and there, across what once was 
a mirror lake, wet grasses cast swaying, 
tapering shadows in the dying light.


As the skyline fades into the twilight,
exultations throaty and raucous echo
from new puddles, fresh waterholes.

Shrill jubilations of insects and night birds
fill the air, rejoicing over a sense of rebirth
in the aftermath of a rainy afterglow!


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful imagery in your "Afternoon Afterthoughts". Totally enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Please keep writing, your talent shines. Always, Annalise
Naces Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 4:44 AM
Thanks, Annalise.
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Quite expressive and interesting write, romeo
Anderson Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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