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Aftermath

Written: November 13, 2023
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The exhausted soul's speech is faint.
In response to the voice of dream.
When faith lends its way to conflate
The exhausted soul's speech is faint.
Where the bloom faded with berate
lack of mind and frame as soul screams
The exhausted soul's speech is faint.
In response to the voice of dream.

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Victor Buhagiar November 14, 2023 at 7:28 AM Well written triolet. Blessings

Miranda Hawley November 13, 2023 at 4:02 PM Excellent Triolet!

Silent One November 13, 2023 at 1:45 PM This one is deep and I could fee the angst of a tired soul.. again it rhymes and flows very well..

Bill Baker November 13, 2023 at 1:33 PM Another nice Triolet, my friend. You write them very well. Have a pleasant week. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2023 at 12:18 PM - Valuable knowledge and unique insight that daydreaming is not mainly motivated by "the perfect life" ... a lovely and sensitive poem, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress November 13, 2023 at 11:33 AM I can feel that refrain “ exhausted…” the exhaustion you’ve described and expressed here is so vivid and so soul stirring. Somedays we are emotionally physically and in every way exhausted, and in those times yes speech is faint. The topics and subjects you touch and write about are so philosophical. I absolutely loved reading this triolet. You weave words effortlessly! Sending you light always