Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Jueju

Afterlife Enigma

Mystery of what wait us
                                     After this life passes
                                   Is something ambiguous
                                Since has some great biasses

                                     Heaven is the destiny
                                 The most humans believe in
                                   Souls keep existing after
                                   Transcending to afterlife








Nayda Ivette
10-28-2015

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Kp Nunez October 29, 2015 at 7:06 AM Thought provoking write, Nayda. I do believe. This is nice. First time I've encountered a write named as that. I'll have to check it out. Thanks! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 29, 2015 at 8:43 AM Jueju poems are quatrains with each line consisting of five or seven syllables. Wujue is the five-syllable form and qijue is the seven-syllable form. Is the first time I write a poem in this form and I liked it.

Jill Spagnola October 28, 2015 at 11:39 AM Nayda, I am a fan of some type on energy afterlife as well. nice write...:), jill Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 28, 2015 at 2:02 PM Thank you very much Jill.

Kathie Shank October 28, 2015 at 11:35 AM Yes, what a topic of discussion. You could add and add to this poem if you wished with such a huge topic. You're title was a great lead in to your poem. It really grabbed my attention. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 28, 2015 at 2:02 PM Thank you very much Kathie.