Afterlife Enigma

Mystery of what wait us After this life passes Is something ambiguous Since has some great biasses Heaven is the destiny The most humans believe in Souls keep existing after Transcending to afterlife Nayda Ivette 10-28-2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 10/29/2015 7:06:00 AM

Thought provoking write, Nayda. I do believe. This is nice. First time I've encountered a write named as that. I'll have to check it out. Thanks!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/29/2015 8:43:00 AM

Jueju poems are quatrains with each line consisting of five or seven syllables. Wujue is the five-syllable form and qijue is the seven-syllable form. Is the first time I write a poem in this form and I liked it.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 10/28/2015 11:39:00 AM

Nayda, I am a fan of some type on energy afterlife as well. nice write...:), jill

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/28/2015 2:02:00 PM

Thank you very much Jill.

Kathie Shank

Date: 10/28/2015 11:35:00 AM

Yes, what a topic of discussion. You could add and add to this poem if you wished with such a huge topic. You're title was a great lead in to your poem. It really grabbed my attention.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/28/2015 2:02:00 PM

Thank you very much Kathie.