Carrie Richards Poet Rictameter

Afterglow

Somewhere,

an afternoon

unveils with eagerness,

the sun, which swims out of a cloud, 

lazily, unclothing bronzed vacancies---


Illustrious, unabashed light

strokes, awakening bliss

that does exist,

somewhere




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Inspired By Visual # 1  for Nette Onclaud's Contest:" Just Nine Lines"
By Carrie Richards      9/8/13

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Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 10:11 AM Carrie, ... love the win....always love LINDA

Skat A September 12, 2013 at 8:12 AM a nice little win Carrie. ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman September 11, 2013 at 8:51 PM Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan September 11, 2013 at 8:21 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2013 at 6:10 AM carrie, you leave me breathless.... congrats on your placement and thanks for visiting my blog.. more!..:) huggs

Tahera Mannan September 10, 2013 at 10:58 PM Glowing indeed. Many congrats for the win.

Sandra Adams September 10, 2013 at 8:21 PM nicely done Carrie...congrats on your win :)

Cecilia Macfarlane September 10, 2013 at 8:16 PM Carrie, I like how you wrote this, leaving us to our imaginations. Well done! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 4:40 PM I give you a glowing review! Congratulations.

Pace Ink-U-Script September 10, 2013 at 3:17 PM Congrats on your win!! :)

Johnny Rhinem September 8, 2013 at 5:56 PM † Very Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Carrie Richards ˜ Made Myself Consider Adam's Eve Amid Her Innocence As Purity ? Waltzing Through Love's Joyful Garden ˜ I Hope That You Are Doing Well And Good To Read Your Lovely Poetry Again, Love, John