Victoria Anderson-Throop Poet Rhyme

Afterglow

AFTER GLOW

 

She said --- my skin is singing

Night air dances with your kiss

There’s ancient music ringing

conducted by our bliss

 

He said--my heart is racing

Like there is more to come

As my life is chasing

To beat a mighty drum

 

She said-- my eyes are blazing

With colors never known

Their pulsing is amazing

a vision rarely shown

 

he yawned and said  --Sweet Darling

Let’s hold each other tight

Contemplate in silence

Our most romantic night

 

She yearned for all night talking

To explore his inner mind

But wisely kissed his ear good night--

To dig another time.


Victoria Anderson-Throop 2013

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Rockman Pritts April 22, 2013 at 12:28 AM Well done Victoria. This was a great write. You displayed the emotions very well. I enjoyed this one very much. If you would like to read how I approached the subject, try "Sweet Love" or "Lovers Moon". Thanks for sharing a very good read. The rhyme and rhytym were very pleasing. Rockman :-)

Gordon Mcconnell April 10, 2013 at 9:37 AM lovely write Victoria, really a joy to read, hope you're having a blessed day, Gordon

Jennifer Perry April 9, 2013 at 5:56 PM Lovely piece!

Richard Palmer April 7, 2013 at 4:57 AM wonderful write Victoria,sounds like a nursery rhyme Victoria Anderson-Throop April 7, 2013 at 6:12 AM glad you liked it....this one just came by itself...doesn't happen often to me...but sometimes.... it does sound like a nursery rhyme, although I didn't notice it until you mentioned it!