afterglow

A family of ducks and ducklings decided to cross noon road,
an old man slowed down his slower gait, stood on road to halt traffic,
when birds were safe, he went back to his place feeling happy like god
He did not see that the thankful hen clucked and nodded at him too.
acted in kindness
both giver and receiver
bathe in afterglow

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Date: 4/7/2025 8:43:00 PM
Sweet picture!
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 4/7/2025 9:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and words dear poet. some actions fill us with joy for sure.
Date: 4/7/2025 1:26:00 AM
Being charitable is wonderful and fills us with afterglow.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 4/7/2025 8:00:00 PM
Yeah that's it dear poet. Know what, your comment itself became a 17 syllable monoku! amazing! Thank you for this sparkling words dear friend, thank you for your kind visit.
Date: 4/6/2025 5:55:00 AM
Let's hope he doesn't have a taste for roasted duck! Seriously though, this was an endearing write Thri
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:59:00 AM
haha, thank you for your kind visit and humor dear poet. Thank you very much.
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