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After Using That Hair Oil

Everybody told me it would do wonder
so I applied it without further delay,
little did I realize that it was a blunder,
no hair on head now, no bad hair day!





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Placement:10th ;(June 2011)

Contest:My Funniest Poem ON the Soup

Sponsor:Poet Destroyer

By:kashinath karmakar(11th January 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2012 9:34:00 PM

see joseph may's poem I think it's called Something New. That's probably how Nancy wants her contest done.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/3/2011 5:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kashinath. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 6:17:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., kashinath

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2011 6:15:00 AM

congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2011 10:26:00 PM

Kash, ~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thanks for always supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 9:43:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on another marvelous win with this funny write luv.. enjoy another victory ..wow..

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 8:01:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! funny and makes me smile... junjun *** ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2011 12:39:00 AM

KAsh, look at me up so late and I really should not be here. I got carried away tonight and wrote two poems, Lulu and aother one, which I may post later, or not at all! What time is it in India? well, have a GREAT day.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/12/2011 4:31:00 AM

hhmmmm .. I must have used this oil myself at one time without knowing it! funny poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 7:16:00 PM

hmmm, I Just looked up the form again and it doesn't say how many syllables to use but it says similar to limericks, which are usually 8 or 9 syllables per line. AGain, I think yours is great. That "beat" is a little hard to get but very few people were getting it right,Kashinath. WEll, I am going to go see the winners now. I hope you do better in other contests. YOu deserve many wins! Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/15/2011 2:54:00 AM

aaack-- haha, tough luck for you! but then again no more problems, like you said ;)-- enjoyed this funny piece-- best of luck in the contest! -- nikko :)