After the Rain

A rainbow in the distant sky,
afternoon sunrays soft and shy
on far mountain peaks;
fading song of an unknown bird,
away from me still can be heard,
makes me nostalgic.


Date:6th May 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/8/2014 5:54:00 AM
This is such a comforting and yes, nostalgic poem, dada (hope you don't mind me calling you that)... very beautiful & I enjoyed the images that come to mind. Thank you from my heart for always passing by that poem of mine for my kuya (big brother)-- I have come to know you will always pass by there each year. That means a lot. Thank you!
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:55:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 1:17:00 PM
Congrats for nice win, loved always, bl
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Date: 5/15/2012 5:08:00 AM
awwwh, a feeling piece, kashi..congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:52:00 PM
It speaks to me kash. I'm a sucker for nostalgic. Good write.
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:50:00 PM
Kashinath, yours here remains one of my favorites in the contest. it's right next to deb's rain poem too! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Awesome piece. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for you comment. Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:31:00 PM
congrats on your win Kash...., and thanks for your comments...Joseph
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Date: 5/14/2012 5:30:00 PM
congrats on your win Kash...., and thanks for your comments...Joseph
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Date: 5/14/2012 2:59:00 PM
Kash, this is quite a lovely scene you have portrayed in words....congrats on your winning spot in the contest !! Well done !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:23:00 AM
Kash congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kashi!!! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kash xx
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Date: 5/11/2012 4:49:00 PM
Beautiful piece here and thank you for your comment! Love and light.
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:36:00 PM
Great piece here Kash. As always. Michael
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:32:00 AM
Very beautiful, Kash. U're so good at both Nature and Romance poem. :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:06:00 AM
Kash again as I re-read this, it just flows perfectly well and presents great images..David
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:49:00 AM
Hi Kash (Dada)-- shucks, first off, let me thank you for dropping by my poem-- that was really touching that you did. Over here we call big brother "Kuya". You were right, we did pass by the cemetery and had some sort of picnic over there. Thank you again for the moving comments, it was very thoughtful of you. As for your tail rhyme-- this is really wonderful, I honestly liked the metaphor that this one has. I wish you the best in the contest :D
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:07:00 PM
Nostagia comes in such special packages as this poem Kashi, a beauty to treasure!
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful and very gentle. A moment that is great alone or shared. I much enjoyed the view. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/7/2012 10:00:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:07:00 AM
kash, thanks for all your comments on my blog. Yes, that strip of dirt is directly in front of the porch. I hate how limited my time is right now but it's also nice having hubbie home for a while. My worst day today, I have to stay till 5 at work!! see ya later, alligator.
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:31:00 AM
it's the simple things in life Kash, that i enjoy, like the birds and the rainbows, you capture everything so well here, awesome poem. harry
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:59:00 PM
oawwrhrr, kashi buddy.. i love the " soft and shy" feel... remarkable piece that's a sure winner... where are you?? .. miss ya and huggs! :
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Date: 5/6/2012 2:36:00 PM
Killerific write! I can smell the rain and hear the bird's call! :) Gwendolen
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