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After the Rain

It pattered on the roof through the night In morning, a glistening sight Shiny leaves move in the sun Flowers drink one by one The clouds drift away The puddles stay To be seen To glean Rain Heidi Sands 5/20/18

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/21/2018 6:59:00 AM

Glistening Nonet!! Impressive writing dear, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2018 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/20/2018 11:31:00 AM

Very clever, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Sunlite :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/20/2018 10:24:00 AM

Playing its song at night an glistening in the morning....Nicely penned Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/20/2018 8:51:00 AM

Imagery seen in flowers, and puddles..and drifting clouds..well captured.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2018 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)