After the Party 2017

After Big Brother, and the Party had gone, the telescreens remained. No longer though did they remain solely in former Party member’s quarters. Telescreens had spread to the realm of the Proles. They no longer spied, or spewed out Party doctrine, no, now the telescreens enticed. They showed pictures of luxury items, and wistful holidays that were nearly affordable to those on mining wages, soldier’s wages, or hospitality wages. In the former Party quarters they advertised more expensive vacations and household items, desirous pleasures that were still priced close to the affordable, but only tantalisingly so. These commercials were followed by broadcasts of monetary values and credit ratings. For in the wake of Big Brother and the Party, all were seen as equal -Inner Party, Outer Party and Proles- by the Credit Agencies.

generations fought
struggled against tyranny
for future’s children
and in their freedom they seek
servitude to desires

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/19/2021 12:47:00 PM
All is spurned (even Jesus part of the Creation Event ) was considered of no value, lol))) by Humans His father had reduced the age of from Approx 900 years to 120 to 70.! Madness.. Can You imagine when dead trying to buy off God if Called to account for wrongs committed while Upon earth? And Him not only owning all things Even time & timelessness.. ' I try to imagine but Find my Mind boggling'
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Date: 4/18/2017 11:47:00 AM
Good poem...Scott....one gathers gathers gathers...dies...children throw everything away (hey, its old, musty, dried, cracked & broken!) then gather gather gather...etc....me...i collect rocks, sticks & pinecones!...when the kids throw them out...they will just be returning from whence they came!... brilliant! (you can see I'm quite dilusional)
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Date: 11/19/2021 12:38:00 PM
Love it James. )
Date: 4/16/2017 1:12:00 PM
love this thought-provoking write, my friend
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Date: 3/25/2017 6:52:00 PM
Profound my dear friend, scott and very well written!
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Date: 3/22/2017 6:00:00 PM
Still waiting for more new poems from you!!
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Date: 3/17/2017 8:39:00 AM
- ... after the party ... who will pay the bill ? - Very well written, Scott - Happy weekend hope you have time off from work - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2017 5:00:00 PM
You entertain a multitude of emotions that flitter and flutter away in the back of your conscious mind and take root within your words as they release their wisdom to the page. Emile.
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:36:00 PM
I agree with Teppo, the tanka was quite expressive of your meaning. Powerful poetry. Question for you at Soupmail.
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