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After the Laughter- Comes the Pain

After the laughter, comes the pain- our days are mixed with sun and rain. Life is a steady weather vane- forecasting clime we can't ordain. Its pendulum does swing both ways; unbalanced is its worth of days. What brings us happiness, we praise- but dread the shift to its sad phase. The high-tide days are filled with glee as waves wash out the shore debris, again to turn- and we agree- we reach low tide- just like the sea. Our life is but a huge seesaw some days, we're high, and filled with awe; yet others make us clench our jaw- as we crash down when life turns raw. Laughter's not cherished without pain- for pain does heighten laughter's gain. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Strand Special 3 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 12/16/2019 ~2nd Place~ Contest: One In Four Sponsor: Joseph May Judged: 08/25/2019

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Date: 12/17/2019 5:53:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2019 7:08:00 PM
Thank you again, Greg, for stopping by with uplifting and supportive comments and congrats! Getting into writing again- but only entering contests with appealing and inspirational themes! Again, thank you, and Happy New Year! Hugs, Sandra <3
Date: 8/25/2019 3:09:00 PM
Beautifully rhymed Sandra I especially love and can relate to the 4th stanza:-) many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2019 12:15:00 PM
great ending couplet sweet Sandra, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 8/25/2019 12:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra, for this wonderful description of life and it's ups and downs. I love the last couplet; I will ponder those words today. John
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Date: 8/25/2019 8:49:00 AM
"Laughter's not cherished without pain- for pain does heighten laughter's gain".. Very nicely penned Sandra.. Congrats on your win..
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Date: 8/13/2019 9:59:00 PM
Hi Sandra: I loved the yin and yang of this delightful and wise poem. hugs!!!....Ralph
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Date: 8/12/2019 9:53:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Sandra! It flows so smoothly. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Kim
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