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After the Funeral

After The Funeral

Tim had found his place after the party. Faring well in his urn he waited to be scattered. Compartmentalised, fragmented and united into two batches of memories.

Indian Ocean
Passionate love on beaches
Drift wood adventures

His friends and family celebrated his life. Lit a fire, gathered smoke and cherished what pastures had given them. Salutation, saltation and salt on sad skin. They rejoiced in ambivalent moments of loss and beginning. That was the easy bit. But Tim had always been eccentric and maybe the waves were too smooth on their own. Easy had not been his domain. Always up to challenges and arduous paths, het set a task even in death. ‘Go tell it on the mountain’.

Climb Mount Everest
Fresh air healthy exercise
Dust sprinkled on snow

Would his children rise up to the dare and defiance? Could they respect final wishes? Was it one step too far? Had it been jest and on whom was the joke? Strides upon strides they stumbled to the top of the world. Caressed their blisters and bridged ascent in meaning and closure.

Serene harmony
Stunning demise flying high
Carbon clouds condensed

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Date: 8/6/2018 8:21:00 AM
This is very thought-provoking, appealing, and moving, Kai! I must say, though, that my last wish will be easy and SAFE for my family to fulfill! :-)
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Date: 8/3/2018 3:36:00 AM
Great stuff, this. Excellent story-telling, vivid imagery, there's a lot to really enjoy in this piece. Fave.
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