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for After the floods poetry contest by A. Gangabissoon

After the Floods

After the floods have washed away life
hopes and dreams gone with each wave
sitting now by a once-small creek, rife
with catfish we never thought to save
which, though river, now also a grave

How can life itself be this fragile
Firmly here, and then gone like a gust
of wind that sweeps each lone desert mile
Longed for rain we can no longer trust 
Memories that now have turned to dust

Houses rebuild, harder are moments
together we can no longer share
As time dries tears, a new life foments
friendships we didn't know waited there
a new life of promises and care.

April 20, 2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 5/22/2024 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I liked the verse, "As time dries tears, a new life foments."
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Date: 5/20/2024 8:31:00 AM
Ann, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this skillfully-written, moving poem! Janice
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:20:00 AM
What a wonderful perspective on the contest theme, Ann. The metaphoric image of a flood, regret, changing our lives is wonderfully paired with the gift of hope looking forward. These two themes are wonderfully woven together. Best wishes for the contest. Here's to looking around and appreciating our blessings of today. Blessings of spring joy to you!
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Date: 4/20/2024 3:17:00 PM
Wow. I really like how you did this challenge. You also picked a great form.
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