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for After the floods poetry contest by A. Gangabissoon

After the floods have washed away life hopes and dreams gone with each wave sitting now by a once-small creek, rife with catfish we never thought to save which, though river, now also a grave How can life itself be this fragile Firmly here, and then gone like a gust of wind that sweeps each lone desert mile Longed for rain we can no longer trust Memories that now have turned to dust Houses rebuild, harder are moments together we can no longer share As time dries tears, a new life foments friendships we didn't know waited there a new life of promises and care. April 20, 2024

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Date: 4/23/2024 10:20:00 AM
What a wonderful perspective on the contest theme, Ann. The metaphoric image of a flood, regret, changing our lives is wonderfully paired with the gift of hope looking forward. These two themes are wonderfully woven together. Best wishes for the contest. Here's to looking around and appreciating our blessings of today. Blessings of spring joy to you!
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Date: 4/20/2024 3:17:00 PM
Wow. I really like how you did this challenge. You also picked a great form.
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