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For: After the floods Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

After the Floods

After the floods
of tears 
througout
dark and lonely
nights
of broken
promises
and hurt
feelings
come red
and swollen 
eyes
with puffy 
lids hidden
from the light
of day 
and away
from friends
whose sympathy 
would 
render me
useless.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 10:21 PM
A difficult subject for sure. I sense the loneliness and feelings of despondency in this verse.
Achara Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Indeed. True story from when I was younger. I try not to fret so much these days.
Brotherton Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 5:42 PM
A emotion packed poem, my friend. Hugs to you Chetta
Achara Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 4:18 PM
Thank you.
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