Tamra Amato Poet Free verse

After the Breakdown On Rat Race Road

Use at your own risk!
Recommend durable tires
and a durable psychology. 
I know, I know, I know
that I can't live 
through it again.
That's why I'm walking, 
watching my feet
in my red-rubber shoes.

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 29, 2010 at 7:56 AM Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Tamra. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 12, 2010 at 9:31 AM Tamara, Breakdowns...of any kind, are a royal pain in the back side. Well written little verse here. Did you wear out those red-rubber shoes? (Soup mail) Smiles, Dane Ann Tamra Amato February 16, 2020 at 6:44 PM No I haven't woren out my red-rubber shoes and it's now 2020 Thanks for your comment. Hope all is well. Tamra

Sue Mason August 15, 2009 at 12:14 PM What a great title!! LOL wonderful write here Tamra!! If it hasn't already been said ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I look forward to reading more of your writing!!

Debbie Guzzi August 10, 2009 at 1:42 PM You and me both I fall off sandels! Light & Love