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After the Breakdown On Rat Race Road

Use at your own risk! Recommend durable tires and a durable psychology. I know, I know, I know that I can't live through it again. That's why I'm walking, watching my feet in my red-rubber shoes.

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Date: 12/29/2010 7:56:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Tamra. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:31:00 AM
Tamara, Breakdowns...of any kind, are a royal pain in the back side. Well written little verse here. Did you wear out those red-rubber shoes? (Soup mail) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:44:00 PM
No I haven't woren out my red-rubber shoes and it's now 2020 Thanks for your comment. Hope all is well. Tamra
Date: 8/15/2009 12:14:00 PM
What a great title!! LOL wonderful write here Tamra!! If it hasn't already been said ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I look forward to reading more of your writing!!
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Date: 8/10/2009 1:42:00 PM
You and me both I fall off sandels! Light & Love
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