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After Katherina

After Katherina My faith half mast like a flag Beat no tambourina For shining citadel and rag Of old traditions That could just walk away Form the desolations To tell us pray. After Katherina I saw the Mason-Dixon line Was no mere enigma The living are not color blind God gave us eyes To see, memories to keep Where the waters rise We must wade the deep We must like a fist Bring its fingers together With love insist Our children shall not scatter Wrath for black birds dinner And after the fire next time And after Katherina No Ceaser shall spend the dime After Katherina My soul like thunderbolt shook And wrote Aluta continua With lightning in a book Of water colored grief Where history floats dead bodies And found no relief For colonies of sweet theories.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2009 1:03:00 PM
the title of this grabbed my attention. The way the poem is written is in a Romantic style where the reader is left in no doubt that the theme is big. I think that this is the best poem of yours that I've read and it certainly is different from your others. I wonder if the second line might not have more impact as : 'My faith: a half mast flag'? As a simile it doesn't hold, but as a metaphor I feel it has greater impact. I think the final line is stunning.'a'.
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Date: 3/14/2009 4:15:00 AM
Another powerful write int his one.. Your command of the words and the ease in which they paint your world is wonderful to read. Brilliant writing.
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