After Hours Stroll

Midnight  boom town  streets have this allure
imagining an uncanny venture
eavesdrop veil surround but dark as coal
how I love my after hours stroll

Secret worlds unfold their impish plot
mesmerised entanglement a tiered whatnot
black crush velvet  sky we must extol 
how I love my after hours stroll

Gilt  fantasies that  float across each lane way
fluorescent  gremlin from some ghostly  parking bay
gust on salt ice pier might buttonhole
how I love my after hours  stroll

Snow clad mall whistler gaffe prone 
while wandering the ink hue urban zone
a chapter lift and snatch from begging bowl
how I love my after hours stroll

Traffic signals  stellar  stoic stance
heartbeat of nocturnal moonlight dance
frozen digit signage reeks of twinkling North Pole
how I love my after hours stroll

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Regina Elliott

Date: 2/3/2024 4:38:00 PM

Howard, my gosh, what a vasty and glorious wellspring of writing talent from your soul. Pure genius. Keep on penning, good friend. The universe awaits more. My best wishes. ~

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/1/2024 7:34:00 AM

Dear Howard, your adept use of vivid imagery has ensnared readers' attention and admiration. Numerous verses have left an indelible impression on me, and the composition exhibits flawless harmony. Undoubtedly, this poem can be described as exceptional. The nocturnal atmosphere possesses an enchanting allure, and I am grateful for not having overlooked this remarkable masterpiece. Without a doubt, this is one of my personal favorites from your oeuvre.

Howard Kerr
Date: 2/1/2024 7:49:00 AM

Sotto, I am deeply honoured, flattered, and edified by your magnanimous slants on this work. Eternal gratefulness on my part is due to someone of your literary standing and integrity. May your pen flow to infinity Howard

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/1/2024 5:12:00 AM

Oh my, this poem was such a journey to read and experience! What an amazing wordsmithery you've presented here, that unfurls eloquent imagery and descriptions throughout.. I love so many lines here especially "eavesdrop veil surround but dark as coal", "black crush velvet sky we must extol", "heartbeat of nocturnal moonlight dance" Strolling in the silence of moonlight ahh... This feels so insightful and subliminal. It painted a vivid picture on my heart! A beautiful write. Sending best wishes

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2024 3:20:00 AM

Now, I wonder where you live, if it is a safe place, etc. From your writing its seems like it would be safe and an awesome place to go on a midnight stroll. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/31/2024 3:17:00 PM

I truly think this poem is terrific. Night has a special magic. I was glad I didn't miss this gem.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2024 2:25:00 AM

You have a way with words dear howard, i am in awe of the way youv painted imagery in a manner that gets readers captivated and in awe. So many lines stood out for me and the flow is seamless. I especially love the opening lines, got me hooked to read more especially “ eavesdrop veil surround but dark as coal how I love my after hours stroll“ i can imagine your love for those strolls, so much can be grasped. The last stanza is brilliant too. Exquisite alliterations! Impeccable write really.