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After Forever

Gold no longer blinds the mind
from the stars once left behind

When time forgets to pass
to a love not meant to last

Chance just disappears
when lies are crystal clear

Graves yet put to rest
no more shall feel opprest

Pain no longer reigns
on hopes once left in chains

12/18/2017
After Forever Contest

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Heidi Sands Date: 3/25/2018 12:31:00 PM This poem is so good Charlie. I love it :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/11/2018 8:56:00 PM that is a great poem for what awaits us, Charlie. REally NICE> And congrats. I see it won a contest. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/12/2018 12:27:00 PM Thanks Andrea...

Agnes Krampe Date: 12/25/2017 9:41:00 PM Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/26/2017 10:13:00 AM Thank you Agnes...

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/23/2017 2:03:00 PM Very spiritual poem, Charlie. It breathes w/graceful vitality. Beautiful pen strokes from a master poet! Aurora bright poetry. Love and smiles always. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/24/2017 7:51:00 AM Thank you Freddie, Merry Christmas...

Line Gauthier Date: 12/22/2017 10:23:00 PM Witty as always. Congrats on your win, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM Thank you Line...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/22/2017 10:09:00 PM Back with congratulations Charlie & hugs :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM Thank you Maureen...

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/22/2017 10:05:00 PM Congrats on your win, Charlie, with this concise, powerful piece. Janice Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM Thank you Janice...

Ram R. V. Date: 12/22/2017 8:02:00 PM Pain couched in poetry. Good read. Congrats, Charlie! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:12:00 AM Thank you Ram...

John Lawless Date: 12/22/2017 6:04:00 PM This is a wonderful statement of the hope that some pain has an "after" and a new "forever". thanks for participating in the contest Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:12:00 AM Thanks for the consideration John...

FJ Thomas Date: 12/20/2017 5:26:00 PM So sad but beautiful still Charlie :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/23/2017 10:11:00 AM Thank you Shadow...

Annette Gagliardi Date: 12/19/2017 9:27:00 PM Nice addition to the contest. Sounds like you lost someone you loved. If so, I'm sorry for your loss Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/20/2017 11:12:00 AM Thank you Annette.

Silent One Date: 12/19/2017 7:35:00 AM Pain is the only thing that reminds us we are alive.. you did this so well... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/19/2017 9:58:00 AM Thank you SO...

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/19/2017 4:00:00 AM Such a good write, much delivery with brevity. This is good stuff, Charlie, I highly enjoyed it ... CayCay Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/19/2017 9:58:00 AM Thank you CayCay...

Alexis Y. Date: 12/18/2017 5:25:00 PM Hi Charlie, This is a good take on this contest theme. Sometimes it doesn't work out. With that being said should one close their heart to love because they are afraid it won't last? I wish you the best of of in luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/19/2017 9:57:00 AM Thank you Alexis.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2017 1:23:00 PM Love this eloquent beautiful pen Charlie, my best to you in the contest :) xomo Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/18/2017 2:52:00 PM Thanks Maureen....

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/18/2017 1:21:00 PM Very potent words Charlie--I enjoyed reading your poem--well written..best for a win! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 12/18/2017 2:52:00 PM Thank you Vijay.