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After Forever

The long kiss had finished but still we embraced, love's giddiness filling our heads, your gaze locked on mine then you spoke, soft and low, “ I'll love you forever” you said. But after forever came Bev and then Rachel, and then Corrinne and Kirstie and Ruth, also Lesley and Janet so it does seem to me that forever is short, that's the truth. For contest 'After forever', sponsor John Lawless

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Date: 12/18/2017 1:49:00 AM
A big smile for this one Viv. A very clever take on the theme, at least you remembered their names.
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Date: 12/16/2017 9:17:00 PM
Ha! And so it goes...after forever. I believe we have a winner here.
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Date: 12/16/2017 10:34:00 AM
smacked upside the head by reality...forever
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Date: 12/16/2017 1:51:00 AM
ha ha ha behave Mr Viv lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2017 12:01:00 AM
Giggle. Yup :)
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