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After Dark

After Dark The moon splays its splendor. Red roses somber in vase. Subliminal shadows, peaked and sallow, flicker like windswept, willow flame. Inscription, on her headstone, illuminated. 10/14/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2017 7:03:00 AM

Both the form and the content have been tackled with a capable pen, Kim. The contrasting imagery strikes a balance between light and dark. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Paul! <3

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2017 6:18:00 AM

Lovely imagery--best for a win, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 6:19:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/15/2017 6:13:00 AM

They say a picture is worth a thousand words --- but you have proved that it doesn't take a thousand words to create one. Thanks for sharing this Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 6:14:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jerry!