Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

After Coming Home From Office

husband told his wife
                                          running along a rickshaw
                                             he saved ten rupees

                                            wife said him foolish
                                  he could have saved one hundred
                                               if ran along car

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Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2015 at 12:46 PM LOL, this is a fun read... :) Hello my friend... I hope you are well, I will always enjoy your poems. I come on here to post and return all warm smiles. Thank you so much for always being a best friend. Soon, I will have lots of time to be on here... Take care my friend... Enjoy my new poem... HUGS... LINDA Bl Devnath July 15, 2015 at 1:35 PM Thanks my *friend of always for your beautiful comment as ever. Loved always,bl

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 9:28 AM Thanks for sharing Bl Devnath July 15, 2015 at 1:34 PM Thanks for your comment my lovely friend. Sorry for late replying. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2015 at 7:13 PM funniest one you had up recently. I really like this one. Bl Devnath March 15, 2015 at 11:38 AM Thanks my lovely friend for you liked it. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 10:11 AM lol made me chuckle BL:-) Hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath March 9, 2015 at 10:15 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. At least you have left the sound of between smile and laugh, i know. Loved always,bl