After All These Years

I looked into her transformed face
Fabric of the unknown years  
surrounds her like a thousand tears
A face so pale, of ruthless gray 
Betrayed, abandoned by her youth
Not that girl from yesterday....
and seems a ghost of someone else

Our friendship born in childhood, 
How young, and carefree we were then
She, with bright eyes, and blond hair that curled
around high cheeks and rosy chin
She was the one who wore a light
Who's charm, and laughter I so admired
The childhood where we would conspire,
and dance in grass till the twilight hours

Where is the face of innocence?
Where is a trace of radiance?
No longer there, not one small glimpse
Where is the girl that I once knew?
Oh, but now inside my heart
I weep and want to change the course

Today, our meeting here, by chance
I see the toll of years that passed.

In my mind, and in my dreams, she had always been
The fair maiden, the one who had held my hand
Two little girls who made such plans
Who sat in the shade beneath the trees
And in the dark we wished on stars.
Those stars have vanished from her eyes,
and smiles have said their last goodbyes

Farewell my friend.....this time I cry


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Augustus Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Awesome poem of regrets and the years that go by that some people allow to take the spirit of their youth. Brilliant poem and I wasn't bored at reading it. It was poetic enough to sound like a poem; but common enough to sound like a normal conversation if you know what I mean. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Much deserved.
Strand Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 12:42 AM
Congrats on your success in Michael's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Goff Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 9:01 PM
gripping poem..... awesome! congrats! Carrie! jim
Rider Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 4:17 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Michael's contest! Truely a wonderful poem! ~*~ Trudy~*~
Ginn Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 6:54 PM
Its so hurtful to know the hopes and dreams of someone we love and know they have fallen so short of their wants. Beautifully sad and painful. Laurie
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November 5, 2008 at 6:37 PM
This touches. As we get older, we find that in spite of many hardships we meet old friends whose lives were much more difficult and the years were not kind. My best friend has 23% of his heart working.. We laugh and joke around but it scares me. We were friends since we were five. God bless. Vince
Strand Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:24 PM
Congrats on your success if you care to email me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Torres Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 4:05 PM
Carrie this is so gripping and sad. If it is true Im sorry for your heartfelt feelings of your dear friend. You really were able to put me there with you in all your heartfelt emotion very excellent write. Michael
Loving Iii Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 1:44 PM
as they say " we will always have Paris" that goes for everyone their best friends and their beautiful bodies. it almost time to abandon this old body for a new one. and there's only one way to do it. john
Cooper Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 8:21 AM
love this! great pen!
Ahmad Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 3:48 AM
too emotive .... too touching......nice write......keep writing
Reynolds Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 2:56 AM
A very sad and emotional write. I know how that goes, so very sad. love Kristin
Jordan Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 5:01 PM
This poem is very moving and emotional Carrie - You certainly were able to grasp the feeling of despair that only years can bring - Great job on this most open write - most of my childhood friends are dead or doing life it is really sad - God Bless you neighbor
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November 3, 2008 at 4:50 PM
This is so powerful, sad, and moving. I was lost in these moving words rushing through to see how it all ended. I especially loved the line, I weep tears for the vision I held in my heart. Very moving and touching. I am always moved by you Carrie and your heart and how it shines through your work. It shows care and thought with each work you post. I know you don't to hear this from me but continue writing and pouring your heart out, it makes for such honest and pure poetry. Thanks. Chris.
Winter Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:21 PM
Well, our childhood memories remain strong. Life happens and sadly some people follow a long, difficult path. Perhaps the wrong path. Very sad to see someone so special to you in memory, appear so strikingly different in, shall we say, an unflattering way. Life is strange indeed the way things/people turn out after all is said and done. A sad but often true to life write. Love, Shar
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November 3, 2008 at 1:56 PM
Beautifully written but sad poem Carrie. I had a similar experience when meeting an old school friend through Friends Reunited; terribly sad. How true that we hang on to those images when we last saw them. Love, Nigel
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