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After a Summer Rain

clouds
dark detaching with
bright sunlit parts
rainbow
multihued emerging with
magical glorious glow
Originally Written Date: 09/22/2020 Now Submitted Date: 11/28/2020 Submitted For: On Your Marks Naturally Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Wards

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Date: 11/6/2020 2:18:00 PM
This was a lovely first post on poetry soup... You are a talented poetess .
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/6/2020 10:47:00 PM
Silent One thank you so much... Actually, I came here to participate in the contest. this was written for a contest 'Paint A Picture', but as I forgot to date the poem, it didn't place. This group is amazing all poets encouraging each other... so, I continue to exist here. Have a wonderful, cheerful day my friend. :)
Date: 10/25/2020 8:49:00 AM
Well discribed Anitha, they are amazing to see in all their glory. Quite often you see a double one, the wonders of creation. Welcome to soup Tom
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/26/2020 4:36:00 AM
Yes very true Tom. Thank you for your visit and comment.. much appreciated.. :)
Date: 10/19/2020 5:30:00 AM
Beautifully written Verse
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/19/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by and commenting... Vijay... much appreciated... :)
Date: 10/18/2020 11:20:00 PM
Ani, I love the magical multihued glow of your poem! Congratulations for having this poem be featured this week! ~ John
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/19/2020 3:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment and support John... :)
Date: 10/18/2020 9:56:00 PM
beautiful; it's really beautiful poetic expression
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/19/2020 3:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Mahtab... :)
Date: 10/8/2020 2:15:00 PM
Beautifully written, lovely imagery given, warm welcome to PS. Emilia : )
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/8/2020 11:11:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely words Emilia :)
Date: 10/3/2020 4:34:00 AM
A beautiful description of nature, Ani, welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/3/2020 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much John! Ani
Date: 10/2/2020 7:35:00 PM
Wonderful use of words. You made the reader believe and see. Amazing use of words.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/2/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for the valuable comment. :)
Date: 10/1/2020 10:52:00 AM
Nicely penned. Welcome to P.S. Here you will find like-minded personality. Where do you stay ? You can soup mail me.
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Date: 9/29/2020 11:05:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Anitha! Your nature poem of rainbow emerging from clouds describes the hope we hold onto when life grows discouraging. I hope you find the community of poets to be mutually supportive and encouraging to you. Enjoy your day ~ John
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thank you so much John! Yes a very supportive and encouraging group. :)
Date: 9/29/2020 7:26:00 AM
- A lovely first poem, Anitha :) - Welcome to P- Soup, enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/29/2020 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne. Hugs to you too! :)
Date: 9/26/2020 4:25:00 PM
Great little description from nature! It could be even called a modern tanka!! Welcome to Soup.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/26/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea!!
Date: 9/26/2020 5:32:00 AM
Nice approach. Welcome to PS Group.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/26/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. Feeling good to be a part of this group!
Date: 9/22/2020 5:06:00 AM
Very descriptive work. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/23/2020 3:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment Sara.