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Afro Samauri Vs. the Choka: the Final Scene

The blood from his sword
Stains the old wood of the bridge,
Then stains the water.
Afro Samauri
Cleans off the blade of his sword,
And continues on.

Copyright © Dakarai Cobb | Year Posted 2010

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Royal Trevino Date: 6/5/2010 10:36:00 AM lol well i went from one, and the ending ... this was a cool follow to read:), thanks for the adventure, =(^.^)=Royal Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 6/5/2010 10:18:00 AM did he get into a fight on the bridge??, i'm reading on, =(^.^)=Royal Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 5/30/2010 5:32:00 PM sounds like an epic adventure, enjoyed!! Login to Reply

Mohammad Yamin Date: 5/29/2010 11:56:00 AM A beautiful Choka -thought provoking and elegant. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I Want Your Smile. -Mohammad Login to Reply

Dakarai Cobb Date: 5/29/2010 11:36:00 AM ladies and gentlemen. sorry for the mispelling. i was in a hurry to finish these new chokas and post them. trying out different styles/forms of poetry in a creative way. i that know some think that it is a "childish" narrative, while others seem to enjoy it. so, for those of you who enjoyed it-thank you. for all others-whatever! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2010 3:01:00 PM nice one, enjoyed, but i think i read them wrong. darn let me start with the other parts,..p.d. Login to Reply

Nigel Fox Date: 5/27/2010 1:22:00 PM Er - just a correction warrior - it's Samurai ! Login to Reply