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Afro Samauri Vs. the Choka: the Final Scene

The blood from his sword
Stains the old wood of the bridge,
Then stains the water.
Afro Samauri
Cleans off the blade of his sword,
And continues on.

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Royal Trevino

June 5, 2010 at 10:36 AM

lol well i went from one, and the ending ... this was a cool follow to read:), thanks for the adventure, =(^.^)=Royal

Royal Trevino

June 5, 2010 at 10:18 AM

did he get into a fight on the bridge??, i'm reading on, =(^.^)=Royal

Doris Culverhouse

May 30, 2010 at 5:32 PM

sounds like an epic adventure, enjoyed!!

Mohammad Yamin

May 29, 2010 at 11:56 AM

A beautiful Choka -thought provoking and elegant. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I Want Your Smile. -Mohammad

Dakarai Cobb

May 29, 2010 at 11:36 AM

ladies and gentlemen. sorry for the mispelling. i was in a hurry to finish these new chokas and post them. trying out different styles/forms of poetry in a creative way. i that know some think that it is a "childish" narrative, while others seem to enjoy it. so, for those of you who enjoyed it-thank you. for all others-whatever!