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Afro Samauri Vs. the Choka: the Final Scene

The blood from his sword Stains the old wood of the bridge, Then stains the water. Afro Samauri Cleans off the blade of his sword, And continues on.

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Royal Trevino

Date: 6/5/2010 10:36:00 AM

lol well i went from one, and the ending ... this was a cool follow to read:), thanks for the adventure, =(^.^)=Royal

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/5/2010 10:18:00 AM

did he get into a fight on the bridge??, i'm reading on, =(^.^)=Royal

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/30/2010 5:32:00 PM

sounds like an epic adventure, enjoyed!!

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 5/29/2010 11:56:00 AM

A beautiful Choka -thought provoking and elegant. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem I Want Your Smile. -Mohammad

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 5/29/2010 11:36:00 AM

ladies and gentlemen. sorry for the mispelling. i was in a hurry to finish these new chokas and post them. trying out different styles/forms of poetry in a creative way. i that know some think that it is a "childish" narrative, while others seem to enjoy it. so, for those of you who enjoyed it-thank you. for all others-whatever!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2010 3:01:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed, but i think i read them wrong. darn let me start with the other parts,..p.d.

Nigel Fox

Date: 5/27/2010 1:22:00 PM

Er - just a correction warrior - it's Samurai !