Afro Samauri Vs. the Choka: Scene One

Afro Samauri
Is walking across a bridge,
Without a worry.
His destination
Is in the back of his mind,
Just waiting for him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Trevino Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Well seeing that there were quite a few scenes lol, this should be fun to write,," and let the reading begin haha", destiny awaits... good one, =(^.^)=Royal
Culverhouse Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 5:33 PM
had to read the rest...
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May 27, 2010 at 3:05 PM
love the character my self, this will take forever to read my computer is loading slow. At least i read the ending. it s like cheating on the test. maybe one in between to see how this afro is doing, love it. left you some s.m.
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