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Africa's Greatness

Africa's greatness We got the power ,power is the tower We power tower the mirror , The mirror that reflects our greatness, The greatness that is folded in the unfolded life folder. We shall unfold it through the power of togetherness ,spread through equalization that speaks fears . Figurative we stand our point is clear Moving on without fear, Our minds have gone dipper like lake tanganyika . Hold it, spread it ,and paint it ,to improve its texture , Look back observe your truck ,forward and anticipate reward, Look sideways like crossing ways. Stand our position ,maintain your attention ,feel the tension and completion Speed your reaction to win your potion. - [x] By Lincoln

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Date: 9/11/2020 8:50:00 AM
Hi Lincoln, I like your poem very much! My best friend lives in Africa, so I was quite interested in reading your poem. I like the line "We shall unfold it through the power of togetherness.: The only suggestion I would make is to take a look at the punctuation - commas and periods - because they somehow got moved away from the words they should be next to and it's a little distracting. However, you did an excellent job of creating an interesting poem with repetition and alliteration. Good work!
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