Affections An Open Form

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

AFFECTIONS
unrequited
a
recognisable
resemblance
in
unfinished
replicas

mystery&
curiosity
emanates
in
an
 element
of
renown
&slender
beauty

a
distinct
yet
indescribeable
 aura
indictive
of  despair
accumulates
 out of proportion

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Sotto Poet

Date: 3/22/2023 5:52:00 AM

Wonderful thought throughout, in an exceptional word choice, Brian. A fave for me