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Affectionately Yours

(Septet)



Amorous
thoughts soar through the blue,
to touch a heart that is true;
velvet kisses, softly set upon
the lips of mine affection's
as whippoorwills sing
Perfection...

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 2/20/2011 7:44:00 PM

TY my dear friend for your kind and honest comment on my poem. Thank you for sharing us your wonderful piece of art. Ernilando

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/15/2011 8:14:00 AM

coming back here to say thank you for dropping by my poems, Adell-- always a pleasure to read your comments :) enjoyed reading this again :) -- have a great weekend -- nikko :)

Moonbee Canady

Date: 12/29/2010 2:08:00 PM

Adell, This write is absolutely enchanting! ... Romantic like a young Swain's Desires (or) an older version of loyal Devotion ... in any event I love the way you ended the rhyme ... "the lips of mine affection's as whippoorwills sing Perfection ... (This write brings pure Satisfaction) ... MoonBee

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/11/2010 11:42:00 PM

how romantic, Adell-- your title set the perfect mood for this very sweet write :) -- thanks for dropping by my poems --nikko :)