Affectionately Yours

(Septet)



Amorous
thoughts soar through the blue,
to touch a heart that is true;
velvet kisses, softly set upon
the lips of mine affection's
as whippoorwills sing
Perfection...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tugaff Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 7:44 PM
TY my dear friend for your kind and honest comment on my poem. Thank you for sharing us your wonderful piece of art. Ernilando
K. Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 8:14 AM
coming back here to say thank you for dropping by my poems, Adell-- always a pleasure to read your comments :) enjoyed reading this again :) -- have a great weekend -- nikko :)
Canady Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Adell, This write is absolutely enchanting! ... Romantic like a young Swain's Desires (or) an older version of loyal Devotion ... in any event I love the way you ended the rhyme ... "the lips of mine affection's as whippoorwills sing Perfection ... (This write brings pure Satisfaction) ... MoonBee
K. Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 11:42 PM
how romantic, Adell-- your title set the perfect mood for this very sweet write :) -- thanks for dropping by my poems --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Beautiful, Adell!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Good one that describes the scene..That is set at eve to the Whippoorwills song..Your comments on my work delighted my spirit..Sara
Horsman Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 6:54 PM
A breath of fresh air this is, so beautiful. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Sweet and lovely Verse Adell .. romantic and inviting in one breath of your pen.. enjoyed my friend with luv...
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December 7, 2010 at 9:48 AM
This reads like a tender love letter, Adell. Very nice indeed! So romantic. Love, carolyn
Haick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Soft and beautiful Adell! This goes to my favs list.. Love, Audrey
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December 7, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Beautiful write...touching words....always Michael
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