Affection

In a white living room I was 
surrounded 
by rivers of affection 
streams red with a foreign kind of 
love
they entangled and paired 
and connections were 
perceivable  
among gazes and words 
dressed 
in silver and pink I was there 
and yet 
somehow omitted as friends are 
sometimes 
when the blood-related gather
I was counting the words like
lazy raindrops 
or sheep when I fall asleep getting 
lost in the numbers I stopped 
while 
a few shy words stumbled out 
of my mouth 
awkwardly positioned I smiled a few 
times 
and found my space in the corner of 
a couch 
while the lilies of affection kept booming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Laura, this is a fantastic write! Welcome to Soup.
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August 2, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Deep personal poem... Expressed do well.
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August 1, 2020 at 10:41 PM
Check the typing of the word ‘corner’. This poem is adorable! I liked it ever so much.
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August 2, 2020 at 2:54 AM
Thank you, Caren ! :)
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