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Long time viewed afar How lovely this lady fair Inquired of her life Beautiful available Love's seed blossomed to full bloom Handsome gentleman Inquired about lady fair Got her attention Cupid pulled the bow tightly Arrow tied two forever
Sponsor: Sand Ivy Davis Contest: Tanka-Love & Marriage

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Date: 10/23/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2012 9:52:00 PM
Sara, congrats luv*Siddy
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Date: 10/20/2012 7:56:00 PM
CONGRATS SARA ON A MAGNIFICENT WIN FOR THIS AMAZING TANKA ENTRY LUV ..
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Date: 10/20/2012 5:11:00 PM
Lovely and wonderful piece,Sara...I love this...Arrow tied the two forever...Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 10/20/2012 3:53:00 PM
Sara, enjoy your win' Sandy
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Date: 10/17/2012 5:49:00 AM
funny write....enjoyed reading your work....or should Isay romantic/? I don't remember the rules on Tanka but looks good to me. you know I am a free verse kind any way.
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Date: 10/16/2012 8:20:00 AM
good one :) best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 10/15/2012 8:49:00 PM
I love your approach here Sara.Love your tanka.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 10/15/2012 7:37:00 PM
I like the juxtaposition of the Greek Cupid with japanese Tanka. Best of luck, and I am glad things are improving.
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Date: 10/15/2012 7:01:00 AM
A lovely Tanka poem Sara - Luck in contest - Have a lovely new week! - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:36:00 PM
Loved this one, nice write.
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:10:00 AM
WONDERFUL LINES SO UNIQUELY PENNED SARA WITH VIVID IMAGINATION .. WINNING WISHES LUV ..
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Date: 10/13/2012 2:59:00 PM
a cute little tanka tale from you. gotta love Cupid.
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