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Advice To Those Who Plan To Love the Broken: Don'T

And I lay flat with him, as he took the stars out of is pocket and placed them back in the sky; lighting my whole world again like you once did. but you taught me better than to love someone who takes my soul swimming in depths where my mental sanity drowns. and I'll teach all those after me: Do not stay if the glass is shattered, you will bleed out before picking up all the pieces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/18/2017 5:59:00 PM
This is a lovable poem. I look it and it is inspiring Alieana.
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Date: 3/10/2017 4:11:00 AM
This imagery is so great, so wonderfully written.... But it is also so true. But how do you abandon a love that is so true, it's so difficult.
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Date: 3/6/2017 1:27:00 PM
Nice write Alieana. The imagery is fantastic. Very true.
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Date: 3/3/2017 11:57:00 PM
Perfect potent little poem. a 7 and a fave, well done :)
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Date: 3/3/2017 5:03:00 PM
Well Written Alieana.
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Date: 3/3/2017 4:42:00 PM
Wow, this was so very cool, such an expressive and affecting poem. Nicely done.
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