Advice To My Pupils Before I Withdraw

To conquer you should at both ends the candle burn
By leaps and bounds seek long to sojourn
In the arena of knowledge imbibe from every stream
Lend an ear to your flaws,don't be so swift to overesteem 

You would later eventually society confront
Malefactor throngs from all edges affront
The road of success is not of any thorns devoid
Pursue unpretentious learning and haughtiness avoid

Don't your teachers attempt to clone
Make a carbon copy of them or their image atone
We cheatingly have treasured our own strains and weakness
Superbly camouflaged them and denied our faultiness

If despite all,you sense you the plateau reached
Bowing out would quell our gusto to teach.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Inspirational piece of work! I liked the fragmentation and the rhyming. Sweet and enjoyable didactic words..My pleasure to read your poems.
Dhaou Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Thanks heaps Broken Wings for your nice comment. Glad you liked my poem. Your poem is really ravishing to say the least ! Have a nice time !
La France Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Abdel, your poem is very good, I liked many of the lines, they rang so true to me, like ''make carbon copy of them or their image atone' and thanks so much for visiting my poem oh the tears and your kind comment ~~
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