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Advice to my pupils before I withdraw

To conquer you should at both ends the candle burn By leaps and bounds seek long to sojourn In the arena of knowledge imbibe from every stream Lend an ear to your flaws,don't be so swift to overesteem You would later eventually society confront Malefactor throngs from all edges affront The road of success is not of any thorns devoid Pursue unpretentious learning and haughtiness avoid Don't your teachers attempt to clone Make a carbon copy of them or their image atone We cheatingly have treasured our own strains and weakness Superbly camouflaged them and denied our faultiness If despite all,you sense you the plateau reached Bowing out would quell our gusto to teach.

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Date: 3/17/2018 3:43:00 PM
Inspirational piece of work! I liked the fragmentation and the rhyming. Sweet and enjoyable didactic words..My pleasure to read your poems.
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Date: 2/22/2015 11:05:00 AM
Thanks heaps Broken Wings for your nice comment. Glad you liked my poem. Your poem is really ravishing to say the least ! Have a nice time !
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Date: 2/19/2015 7:07:00 AM
Abdel, your poem is very good, I liked many of the lines, they rang so true to me, like ''make carbon copy of them or their image atone' and thanks so much for visiting my poem oh the tears and your kind comment ~~
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